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haste killed creativity
Created on 2007-04-13 19:22:10 (#12719797), last updated 2008-02-27
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| Name: | skip_church |
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| Location: | rochacha, New York, United States |
i think i need to get some of my writing out there
for critique's and stuff
so i can get better
so this is where i'm going to post a series of short stories by chapters
if i stop posting, make me start again
i want everyone to be really harsh when they critique, and really honest. tell me if it's boring, tell me if you hate it.
except don't give me any of those "you repeated a word too much" comments. cause that's stupid and i usually know when a paragraph or a sentence like that sucks.
story 1: Alice
(lol original i know)
in case you guys don't know who i am :
radiation__high
for critique's and stuff
so i can get better
so this is where i'm going to post a series of short stories by chapters
if i stop posting, make me start again
i want everyone to be really harsh when they critique, and really honest. tell me if it's boring, tell me if you hate it.
except don't give me any of those "you repeated a word too much" comments. cause that's stupid and i usually know when a paragraph or a sentence like that sucks.
story 1: Alice
(lol original i know)
in case you guys don't know who i am :
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